[投稿英文期刊]中国人常范的错误3

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[投稿英文期刊]中国人常范的错误3

【字体：大中小】 时间：2005年11月29日 来源：生物通

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【编者按】如今要取得博士学位必需要有SCI文章，许多人因此纷纷投稿英文期刊。许多人在投稿英文期刊时会遇到这样或那样的问题，生物通将就这个问题为大家提供系列的文章。首先介绍的是一位审阅过200余篇稿、以英语为母语的审稿人写的中国人常范的错误，相信这些错误具有一定代表性，希望能够帮助各位正在为paper奋斗的莘莘学子们。

在上一篇中讲了如何避免一个过长的句子，现在讲讲在一个相对简单的句子中如何处理位置关系。通常要将一个句子的主要意思放在目的、定位或者原因的内容前面。中国人比较惯用的语法就是将目的、定位、原因、事例和情况等一些介绍因素放在前面。这样在英语中会被认为削弱了主要意思的重要性，让读者觉得作者不够直接。比如中文会说：为了**的目的，我们进行了**的研究。而英文则比较偏向于说：我们进行了**的研究，这样做的目的是**。还是看看具体的例子吧。

Incorrect For the application in automobile interiors, this paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing.

Correct This paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing for application in automobile interiors.

Incorrect Especially when numerical control (NC) techniques are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods bring a huge economical benefits, the advantage of constructing 3D model becomes extremely obvious.2

Correct The advantage of constructing a 3D model becomes extremely obvious especially when numerical control (NC) techniques are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods bring a huge economical benefits.

Incorrect Inside the test box, the space was filled with asbestos.

Correct The space inside the test box was filled with asbestos.

Incorrect In practice, we employed this approach to dispose of a wheelhouse subassembly of one kind of auto-body, and the results show that this method is feasible.

Correct We employed this approach to dispose of a wheelhouse subassembly of one kind of auto-body, and the results show that this method is feasible.

Incorrect To ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality, CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production.

Correct CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production to ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality.

中文中，我们也常说当**的时候，～。这种倾向于总是把指示时间的短语放在前面也是不妥当的。

Incorrect When U is taken as the control parameter, the BDs for =0.0, 0.001, 0.005 are shown in Fig. 8.

Correct Figure 8 shows the BDs for =0.0, 0.001, and 0.005 when U is taken as the control parameter.

总之强调在写一个句子的时候，先想想我要写的主要内容是什么，然后赶紧写下来。这样主次分明，次要的都在后面呢。

Incorrect Based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a CAD model, the extended STL format is described in this section.

Correct The extended STL format is described in this section based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a CAD model.

Incorrect The 3D dentition defect and restoration element models are designed precisely with complicated surfaces.

Correct The 3D dentition defect and restoration element models with complicated surfaces are designed precisely.

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